Idea of progress 15 - correction

Nouns

pitfalls
a breakthrough
a downside
a watershed
a moot point
a pipe dream
the apex of
a hot-button issue
a doomsayer
a hot topic
a turnabout
intricacy
a sheer fact
a smokescreen
a rosy picture

Verbs

to be teeming with
to dismiss a fact
to crack down on
to trump something
to point out something
to brush up something
to circumvent s.o/sth
to play down sth
to side with s.o
to be lambasted
it can lead to
to gain ground
to underpin
to skyrocket
to be committed to doing sth

How to write a question :

en anglais, on ne dit pas "problematic," mais "question." De même, on évitera d'utiliser we mais plutôt I. On vous demande un avis personnel, bien documenté, bien structuré. Vous avez une problématique? Montrez-là! De même pour le plan.
Pour ce faire, vous pouvez :

- utiliser une phrase interrogative : to what extent is monstrosity a quintessential element of imagination? 
- utiliser une interrogative indirecte (ça c'est bien) : I will wonder to what extent monstrosity is a ...
- utiliser une affirmation : Monstrosity is a quintessential element of imagination. (déconseillé dans un contexte éducatif français, plutôt US)
!!! WARM UP !!!

 plus de conclusion à partir de maintenant.
A la place:

 présentez un document personnel à propos d'une des notions - étudiées.
- donnez votre problématique
- présentez un plan (thématique, ou antithèse/thèse), expliquez en gros ce dont il aurait été question dans vos parties.
- énoncez vos transitions.
- enfin, justifiez le choix de votre document.















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